Hey guys, if you want a quick laugh that isn't entirely appropriate, you should totally check out my youtube channel. Every one has told me it's pretty good, but I need some constructive criticism because it was mostly from friends. If you take a look tell me what you think. Thanks guys :)
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put music behind your videos to make them x20 better
also improve your pacing
also improve your pacing
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vedicardi wrote:put music behind your videos to make them x20 better
also improve your pacing
Faster or shorter? And I'll give it a whirl.
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faster
if you are going to stay on one scene for an extended period of time, at least have the camera move, or put it in a particularly interesting location
if you are going to stay on one scene for an extended period of time, at least have the camera move, or put it in a particularly interesting location
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Alright, thanks for the truth, I'll try and improve on that with later vids
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vedicardi wrote:I mean at least find someone to hold the camera
Or use wingardium leviosa.
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vedicardi wrote:I mean at least find someone to hold the camera
Sadly we do have some one holding the camera lol.
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MoN01 wrote:vedicardi wrote:I mean at least find someone to hold the camera
Or use wingardium leviosa.
Yeah, we don't have any wizards on set.
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Watched them all.
Uh, ben gay made me smirk a couple of times. Office samurai also produced smirkage.
The rest were awful. No offence meant but wow, like really awful.
Cops was probably the worst of the bunch, far too long, far too hard to follow/keep interested in. And i'm guessing the point was to be pretty out there and different but you didn't really pull that off, it really just came off as uninteresting and mostly incomprehensible. I'm sorry that's pretty harsh I know but fck it no point lying to you.
You showed promise with the samurai skit, it was short and a little funny. Improve the base subject matter a little and keep the format short would be my best advice.
EDIT: And is that a bong or a hookah I see on your table there? (to be fair, it could be a vase with the vid quality and all but i think i see things protruding from it)
Uh, ben gay made me smirk a couple of times. Office samurai also produced smirkage.
The rest were awful. No offence meant but wow, like really awful.
Cops was probably the worst of the bunch, far too long, far too hard to follow/keep interested in. And i'm guessing the point was to be pretty out there and different but you didn't really pull that off, it really just came off as uninteresting and mostly incomprehensible. I'm sorry that's pretty harsh I know but fck it no point lying to you.
You showed promise with the samurai skit, it was short and a little funny. Improve the base subject matter a little and keep the format short would be my best advice.
EDIT: And is that a bong or a hookah I see on your table there? (to be fair, it could be a vase with the vid quality and all but i think i see things protruding from it)
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iamsensay wrote:Watched them all.
Uh, ben gay made me smirk a couple of times. Office samurai also produced smirkage.
The rest were awful. No offence meant but wow, like really awful.
Cops was probably the worst of the bunch, far too long, far too hard to follow/keep interested in. And i'm guessing the point was to be pretty out there and different but you didn't really pull that off, it really just came off as uninteresting and mostly incomprehensible. I'm sorry that's pretty harsh I know but fck it no point lying to you.
You showed promise with the samurai skit, it was short and a little funny. Improve the base subject matter a little and keep the format short would be my best advice.
EDIT: And is that a bong or a hookah I see on your table there? (to be fair, it could be a vase with the vid quality and all but i think i see things protruding from it)
I don't even smoke D: lol. Thanks, I agree the cops one is kinda shotty, but my the other cop wanted it in there, so it's like...ehh fine. Glad to hear at least a couple sparked your interest. I thought the Shlt Happens one was pretty silly, but I'll try and work with it. I'm definitely going to take up Vedi's idea of adding some music, I think that gave Ben Gay some humor. But thanks for watching.
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