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a song I've made

Postby oed » Fri Jun 12, 2009 8:08 am

So I composed this song sometime ago it's not that good but I thought I post it here to see what you think.. All guitars are played by me including the bass guitar. The drums are made with the open source drum machine "hydrogen". Anyway tell me what you think..

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Re: a song I've made

Postby jdawg » Fri Jun 12, 2009 12:21 pm

Damn we should make a song together.
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Re: a song I've made

Postby oed » Sat Jun 13, 2009 1:34 am

So no one got something to say about my song?
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Re: a song I've made

Postby Blu Ray » Sat Jun 13, 2009 1:59 am

oed wrote:So no one got something to say about my song?

It sound pretty nice, ever thought about making a band? o.O
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Re: a song I've made

Postby oed » Sat Jun 13, 2009 4:02 am

Blu Ray wrote:It sound pretty nice, ever thought about making a band? o.O

Well, arond here there are almost no one who plays a instrument and like metal. I play with a drummer sometimes but he is just to lasy to play more that like once a month.
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Re: a song I've made

Postby NBSRDan » Sat Jun 13, 2009 4:14 am

I found your song pleasant, but a bit repetitive and not very memorable. It was performed well, but overall unremarkable.
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Re: a song I've made

Postby hzac » Mon Jun 15, 2009 8:09 pm

Your song is very basic. How long have u been playin g guitar for? There was some melodic parts of the song that i enjoyed but its no where as intense and it should be. I think the same old drumming is the real let down. same beat for basically the whole song? Also i think you jumped out of key a few times.

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Re: a song I've made

Postby oed » Sat Jun 20, 2009 11:45 am

hzac wrote:Your song is very basic. How long have u been playin g guitar for? There was some melodic parts of the song that i enjoyed but its no where as intense and it should be. I think the same old drumming is the real let down. same beat for basically the whole song? Also i think you jumped out of key a few times.

my music is here is you want to check it out http://www.myspace.com/hzacmusic


I've played guitar for about one and a half year..
And yeah, I know the drums are bad I have absolutely no experience in making drum tracks.
But I don't think it's out of key anywhere, where do you mean?
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